I created a character (npc most likely) for an RPG my friend an I are working on, and he didn't like it. I created another an he suggested a way to "improve it". I created a third version with his ideas in mind, and he quite liked it. I however cannot decide which is better, or if all three should be included, or none of them. So I have come here to ask for assistance.
Version 1Version 3
Any help is much appreciated! 

EDIT: Version two has been removed. Also, I have a new Version 1 (Version 4, if you wish to see it like that.)