Ok so, I'm working on this...literally for you all to tell me how to fix stuff, so in the end it looks fantastic. (and hopefully, I've done everything right and didn't break any rules or common practices, I'm essentially new..having only posted a few times before and then losing the site XD)

As of right now, it's clearly a WIP...but before I go on to the rest of her body, I had figured I'd ask you all what would need improvement. I really want to shade this with dithering, but I don't think I clearly grasp the effect much at all, so if I would be able to get some help with shading more than the lining, I'd be grateful. Obviously once I get down the concept I'll work more on her body as well, updating this thread with my progress..and thank you for at least viewing the thread

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