Hi 

I'm working on a fairy tale based RPG and got some great help here a little while ago with my portraits. I have been working on a logo to use and would like some feedback. In case you are wondering the game is a turn based RPG with roguelike elements.

Here is what I have so far:



I'm happy with how Red looks and the font, but I'm really struggling with something to bring the darker side to it. I tried putting the shadow of a stalking wolf behind her, but my version just looked cheap. In this one I tried playing around with the font, but as you can see it does not look menacing.

I would really appreciate some feedback on how you think I could add that bit of "menacing" to this logo.

Thanks

Hey all! I'm new here and I was hoping I could get some feedback on the title screen for a game I am making.

The one thing I really want feedback on is that the tentacle is meant to look nebulous, like it could almost be made out of gas or liquid but is all held together anyway.

I'm pretty new to pixel art, so any feedback is more than welcome

Thanks