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Pixel Art / Deku Link Critique Please.
« on: November 20, 2017, 04:32:25 am »
Hello.
I haven't posted here in months! But I won't delve into that here. I want a critique of a piece I made months ago.
I do not plan on editing it so everything is finalized. The reason I chose this piece was that I think it's my very best piece I've made. It would give meed the critique I want.

Anyways; here is the picture:


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Pixel Art / Reindeer
« on: December 12, 2016, 01:09:40 am »
Hello
I am making a pixel art of a reindeer:






Notes:
  • The purpule-ish and pink colors are from an analogus color schmeme
  • Light source is in the top-right

Thanks in advance!

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Pixel Art / Bouncing Ball animation
« on: September 25, 2016, 07:15:47 pm »
Hello
I have a bouncing ball animation and I would like critique:



* Ball is supposed to be bouncy
* Objects in the scene react to the impact of the ball when it hits the floor

Thanks!

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Pixel Art / sans.
« on: August 04, 2016, 02:36:00 am »
I have made a drawing of sans. and I would like some critique please  ::).



Facts:

The image uses 18 colours.

(That is all I could think of)

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Thanks!

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Pixel Art / Rpg Character Base
« on: July 03, 2016, 04:39:13 am »
I made an RPG character base



Facts:

One: light source is top middle

Two: I dunno


Questions:

One: Does it look like a human / Does the lighting & Shading define the form of the human?

Two: Is the color palette Good or Bad?


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Pixel Art / Fan made Pokemon sprite
« on: July 01, 2016, 07:01:42 pm »
I made this fan made Pokemon sprite:



Info:

1ST: I used 4 colors in the palette

2ND: There are 6 frames of animations

Questions:

1ST: Did I use too much dithering or too less or enough

2ND: Did I use too much AA or not enough or enough

3RD: Does the sprite look like a flame / spirit & does it loop well?

Here are the frames:





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Pixel Art / New Profile Picture
« on: June 05, 2016, 09:52:28 pm »
Hello and I made a profile picture for myself and I need critique.



Facts:

1st: I used at least 5 colors on this (I think?)

2nd: I dunno

Questions:

1st: I think there is a lot of banding going on in the binary text and the edges of the cube, so is there a way to fix this

2nd: Did I use enough AA (Anti-Aliasing) or not enough

I hope you can help me

(Also I haven't abandoned my basketball player forum. It's just that I am somehow having trouble with it (you can also see the link to it here: http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=20111.0))
P.S: This info is not relevant but the binary in the box spells something kay?

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Pixel Art / Basketball Player
« on: April 23, 2016, 02:03:36 am »
I made a Basketball player and I would like some critique on it:



And here is the palette:



The Facts:

First: I did not use all the colors in the palette (Thats not very useful info)

Second: The light source is supposed to be in the top left

Third: Nothing Else

The Questions:

First: Should I use dithering here or not?

Second: The 2 on the shirt seems a bit off, Is there anything to improve it?

Third: Nothing Else

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Pixel Art / GeomeGreen Forum Avatar
« on: April 09, 2016, 02:07:51 am »
I decided to change my avatar so I made this cute little block:


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(Isn't he a cutie  :))

I decided to name him: GeomeGreen

Here is the frames for GeomeGreen :



What do you think?

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Pixel Art / RMXP Stone Autotile Critique
« on: March 07, 2016, 10:48:42 pm »
Hello and I am just a beginner at pixel art/spriting

So I have made a stone wall autotile (For RMXP) And I would appreciate some critique on this



Please dont say anything too negative
im just a beginner at this


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