The main game I'm working on in Game Maker is Project Paradox, a Paper Mario style RPG that has characters based roughly off of people I've met in another community.  I want to give the game a graphical style of VS fighting games, because those rock.  Here's what I have so far.  C & C would be much appreciated, but don't feel forced to critique all of them at once.


Machu
Oh snap, that's me?  This is the first one I've made.  I was going for a "wandering magician" type character, and I like the design.  However, being the first one, there are probably several details I'm missing.


Shadow III
A religious paladin sort of character.  I like how this one turned out, but I think some parts of the armor might be at the wrong angles.


Uncommon
A somewhat angsty-looking, but actually quite reasonable character.  I'm pretty proud of this one, I don't see any problems with it now.


Tim Taylor
A humorous martial-artist who is hiding his face after being framed.  This character is probably the least "original", as in, the person this is based off of provided most of the design and not me.  I like the funny stance, but I think some details are off.


Gilbert Smith
A brutally honest super-hero.  I love this design, but need some serious help with those muscles.


Hachi Roku
A gentleman thief who always keeps his cool (and also really tall).  Quality is here and there; I'm proud of the head (face and hat), but those legs don't look right for some reason.


Joosh
A bard with an air-guitar (it's invisible).  I think I got the stance and detail pretty well here.  Just don't accuse me of looking at Final Fantasy Tactics while designing this, because you'd be right.


Hunter Green
A monster hunter who has ironically been zombified.  I love the face and hair, but the stance SUCKS.


Squallman
A mad-scientist kind of character who makes complex objects out of very ordinary, simple stuff.  I think I botched the labcoat, but I like everything else.  In case you can't tell, he's holding a remote controller in his normal hand.

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Fenrir Lunaris
A sensative looking character who can turn into a furry werewolf.  I think the human form looks okay, but the wolf form needs to look hairier.

And that's where I am now.  Feel free to ask about any of the characters or the game.