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Pixel Art / Re: Army Guy
« on: December 13, 2009, 06:37:37 am »
He really does need colour or something: he is very hard to see!
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2D & 3D / Re: Bitten by the sidescroller bug...
« on: December 13, 2009, 03:34:17 am »
Absolutely beautiful.
The weapon needs a lot of work though.
- The bug braces too quickly.
- The gun's delayed recoil after firing is both odd and also excessive. Maybe if you had the gun on a sliding mechanism, so it moves backwards when it fires, rather than upwards after it fires (which looks unnatural)
- This is just a possibility, but maybe the guns swing around too much when the bug walks?
- The entire fire animation seems to happen too quickly. Let us enjoy those fantastic effects for a little more than that split second!
The weapon needs a lot of work though.
- The bug braces too quickly.
- The gun's delayed recoil after firing is both odd and also excessive. Maybe if you had the gun on a sliding mechanism, so it moves backwards when it fires, rather than upwards after it fires (which looks unnatural)
- This is just a possibility, but maybe the guns swing around too much when the bug walks?
- The entire fire animation seems to happen too quickly. Let us enjoy those fantastic effects for a little more than that split second!
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Pixel Art / Re: Sprite Sheet: In Progress
« on: December 13, 2009, 03:24:23 am »
As mentioned earlier, the biggest issue with the running animation is that his legs are stuck to each other:
There is no pelvis, no crotch, nothing. Add that in (and remember it's movement will have to be animated too) and your animation should look fine.
Your issues with the Torso should be solved by adding in that pelvis!
There is no pelvis, no crotch, nothing. Add that in (and remember it's movement will have to be animated too) and your animation should look fine.
Your issues with the Torso should be solved by adding in that pelvis!
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