It's an attachment rather than an embed. Only embeds have the zooming functionality.

;3; dang

this seems quite different from the one posted on twitter when it comes to the detailing, but this applies to both.

I guess my immediate concern is that you can'st see how the arms fit into the sleeves (cape?) too well, though. Feels like they're outright missing since where they'd normally hang there's kind of a void of volume or detail. a good example of this is along the waist, where his right arm would probably overlap a bit or distort the shape of the cape/sleeve some to show it's there.

it's very much an issue that could be solved through animations though, as it does create a clean design and a strong silhouette that would do wonders for memorability.

I can see that.  I'd like to keep it more or less the way it is (his pose), but I can fix that in animations, clarifying where his arm is.  I think I noticed this one time I was trying to blot out his body shape for animating.  I'll take another look at it, but you're deff right.

i think they person you commissioned for it was dario @neobrsk
https://twitter.com/neobrsk/status/837300316341161984

That being said, the edit looks nice,  i only feel like the sleeves have some extreme lighting on them.

Almost like he has 2 different coloured sleeves

DARIO! Yeah, that's who it was, thank you :3

and yea I could def see that.  I'll ease up the shading.

Any feedback is really appreciated; character design, colors, technique, lighting, stylization.  Anything, really. 
It's for an RPG I'm working on.

It was commissioned and then edited (I forgot who I commissioned for it - I'm sorry)

EDIT: Commissioned from Dario @neobrsk on Twitter!