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Pixel Art / Re: Tribal Man
« on: September 18, 2009, 06:38:29 am »
He looks like he'd be skinnier.
Maybe make him crouching or sitting.
This looks like it could be a really trippy picture depending on how you do it.

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Pixel Art / Re: [wip] Character design remakes take 2 or 3 or something
« on: September 17, 2009, 05:33:42 pm »
Wow I really like this, I've been gone longer than I thought!
#4 looks so much more feminine now, and green really brings out the blonde hair, maybe desaturate it a bit so it blends with the more grayish tone of the rest of the crew. If the green still looks like too much I would suggest either coloring one item (pants/top) gray(or some other neutral color) or lighten the item on her hips to a med/light gray color, it might help make the green look less intense after you desaturate it.
I like that high shoe/puffy pants transition you got going on with #3, what if you did that to #4 to show a bit more leg? It could be tricky, it could be easy just throwing it out there.

The suspenders look alright on #2, though I think they would be more stretching against his belly, they seem pretty slack to be holding up his pants.
I did like the coat but the suspenders made him look like a good guy while the coat made him look like a badass good guy or a bad guy.

Is that fire that #3 has? I think someone mentioned before you'd want to make it look more like light reflecting and not like he spilled wine on his clothes and face. But I can't remember if you said anything about that and I'm too lazy to double check.

 :y:
 

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Pixel Art / Re: [wip] Character design remakes take 2 or 3 or something
« on: September 14, 2009, 08:42:08 pm »
I think that scarf/thing around the blonde's waist makes him look too girly.
Its hanging off his hips as if he were a girl, it accentuates his curves like a girl, it hangs down to his knees like a skirt (Which isn't really girly, but in this case with the spunky hair and girlish figure it is to me), and if I didn't know any better hes a female who just likes to be one of the boys.

Don't get me wrong though, I love the character (especially since I'm a girl and you didn't make any that were even meant to look like a girl), but until its more obvious of the gender I can only see girl. ^-^

Maybe making him androgynous enough to be seen as either boy or girl, but never have it mentioned would make him more mysterious as a character.

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Pixel Art / Re: [wip] Character design remakes take 2 or 3 or something
« on: September 12, 2009, 07:40:31 pm »
Is the  blonde character a boy or a girl? I can't tell.

Other than that I think they all look really great, can't really think of any advice atm..

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Pixel Art / Re: Happily (isometric buildings)
« on: September 12, 2009, 07:28:38 pm »
It looks like the roof is sinking, but I think its kinda cute. You could probably get away with it, but I'd try and straighten out those tiles so they don't curve so much.

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Pixel Art / Re: Dying Animation help
« on: August 28, 2009, 11:00:58 pm »
I have two ideas for the explosion death.

1- make multiple deaths with an explosion coming out in a different area each time to give variety.
2- have the explosion come from the chest ( I think you could get away with it with your current animation).

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This looks amazing! I've been having many ideas for games running through my mind and the technique you use really inspires me. I like the less tiled look, almost makes the game look more cinematic.

I can't wait to see more.
(And you're getting married? Congrats!)

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Pixel Art / Re: wolfs and dragons/ animated
« on: August 25, 2009, 08:11:02 pm »
^^
Not to mention the feet look like they're twisted wrong.
The wolf is facing us more but the feet are pointed super straight/away from us.
Also, is he meant to look starved? Those look like his ribs, poor thing.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Boss monster
« on: August 21, 2009, 01:40:31 pm »
Yeah the arm position is a little off, but that's kind of the basic appearance I want it to take.
I'm not sure how to fix it, I should probably work on that first since the hands are giving me so much trouble..
I'll have to try and work on it tonight.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Boss monster
« on: August 20, 2009, 05:52:42 pm »


I worked on the hands a bit, not sure if it looks right, maybe a bit better than before.
I think I'm only going to go with 3 fingers and a thumb, we'll see.


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