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Pixel Art / Re: do I look like a doller now? o": [victoire again.]
« on: June 14, 2009, 08:00:17 pm »
The pose look extremely awkward, so you might want to spread out the legs a bit more and make the feet slightly bigger. I can't seem to tell that she's wearing gloves, and you could clarify that by making them slightly bigger or changing the color. I also miss the contrast and darkness from the one on the right.

On the bright side, you have much more shading and the figure looks more genuine. Keep it up.

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Pixel Art / Re: Octopus Boss Sprite
« on: June 11, 2009, 12:47:09 am »
I think it would look more impressive if you made the tentacles more substantial, so that it would seem like more of a threat. Is it supposed to seem evil?

The shading is good. I like the bubbles and the eyes and mouth.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] - Forum Logotype
« on: June 11, 2009, 12:41:32 am »
I personally think the box font is way too unreadable. I think a space between "ung" and "forum" might be useful.

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Pixel Art / Re: dump time
« on: June 10, 2009, 03:25:18 pm »
I thought the cape was some sort of jet exhaust system. I'd suggest clarifying that by making the cape not move quite as much or not so bright where it connects to the character. Plus the cape is distracting my attention away from the character.

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Pixel Art / Re: Bionicle Character
« on: June 02, 2009, 06:35:08 pm »
Since I'm not getting another response for that, I'll post this. It's an insect-like creature. I have the actual set, but here's an example. Link.


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Pixel Art / Re: Bionicle Character
« on: May 28, 2009, 12:05:10 am »
It looks more vibrant but the light doesn't seem real to me. I'm just not sure where to put the light.

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Pixel Art / Re: Bionicle Character
« on: May 22, 2009, 09:58:37 pm »
I know it looks flat, but every attempt that I make just makes it look worse. Would someone provide an example or edit or something to help me with that?

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Pixel Art / Re: Bionicle Character
« on: May 22, 2009, 01:07:59 am »
I removed the lightest color of the yellow and I like it better. I also did a few other minor changes. The hands look like they are outlined in a bright color, and I'm not liking that. Any comments?

Palette: 


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Pixel Art / Re: Sprites (running, jumping)
« on: May 19, 2009, 09:55:09 pm »
I think when jumping he should crouch, and then move his arms upward. When he lands he should hunch down and then straighten up.

The colors and shading are great but the expression seems a bit fake. I tried working around with it but couldn't come up with anything.

Hopefully I'm not restating too much of what has already been said.

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Pixel Art / Re: Bionicle Character
« on: May 18, 2009, 09:55:03 pm »
I worked on the feet a tad more, but can't figure out how to make the head not pillow-shaded. Help?


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