Both look good, i prefer the first one, but i'd choose the one that looks best in your environment

You may want to avoid an outline for the cloth pattern. It will fir better as part of the cloth surface.

What do you suggest to change with it? I don't think it looks very improved by this.

So I've been playing this game called 'Paladins' quite a bit recently, and I decided to try some pixel art of a character called Seris.
I can tell that there is obvious imperfections, I would like critique on it. Thanks.
(I didn't make it exactly like the reference image on purpose)

My pixel art:



Reference Imaged that I used:

But what about your previous topic? You should try to fix your first piece according to the comments given to you and then I believe you will be able to fix some of mistakes in this animation as well. (And by the way they told you how to insert an image into your message)

i'm aware that they told me how to add an image, however they already told me what I had known. I had placed the image's address in the image brackets and it still had not worked.

I like it. Simple but not plain, makes it easier to look at. Great job!