Hi,

I like your art and I feel the world is sadly devoid of good new adventure games, so I spent some time watching and thinking about your scene. For me personally immersion is the most important thing in an adventure game, so I will focus on things subjectively related to that. I hope you can benefit from some of it.

1. The lion's head is beautifully drawn. However, who mounts a head at an angle out from it's plaque?

2. This man obviously is pleased by displaying his interesting life. However the seating arrangement would dictate that the wall we see is the least interesting wall in the room. Why else would he and his potential guest sit with their backs to it? Perhaps the guest chair could be turned at least?

3. His robe is somewhat in style, but also off. A gentlemans robe won't extend further down than the knees. Such a long robe would be impractical, and make him trip around like some old lady. Also he would for decencies sake wear pajamas beneath it.

4. His nose tells us he likes a good drink, as a gentleman of colonial times would. But no drink in sight? A snifter glass perhaps? Also I've always fancied those spritzer bottles with the grid motif. Maybe a liquor cabinet?

5. The spear, it's shaft and position between two African artifacts makes me think this too is an African relic. However, double headed spears are a chinese concept to my knowledge.

6. The drawers in the book case is at a most impractical height. Also, would any craftsman make different size drawers in such an otherwise symmetrical case?

7. His trusted rifle is a tool which in he takes great pride, he even mounted it on his wall, but would he hang it out of reach?

8. The bust in the bookcase, is this some historical figure our patron admires? It's cranial shape is quite strange. Also, a big egg is an interesting display piece, but when it is the only piece in it's compartment, would one place it off center?

9. It would be peculiar to me to displace the exotic shield and weapons to hang slipshod off the wall in favour for two small photographs which would be indistinguishable at that height anyways.

10. On a personal level for me I must say I find the color of the rugs quite horrible. I also think they blend too much with the chairs and table. Perhaps a color more like the curtain?

11. Also on a personal level, the stained windows being unsymmetrical bothers a compulsively symmetrical person like me. This may be a stylistic choice though.

Well, I took pleasure in watching your work, there are many things that are good with it. Good luck in your progress.

- Jonas