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You have a ridiculous amount of colours and anti-alias where I wouldn't call most of this pixel art. It's kind of weird how only the eyes move, it kind of seems like the eyes are surrounded by a painting.

For the animation I would say try to make it look like the eyes close from both eyelids. like this:

Thanks so much! I thought the anti-alias blurry pixel-art was going to look nice, but you're right- it just makes it look like a low-quality image. I only animated the eyes because it was a test run, but thanks for the double eyelid suggestion; makes a lot more sense than what I did.

Pixel Art / Re: Wolf
« on: February 08, 2017, 08:56:07 pm »

Hey there! Great work, but a few pointers:
1. This may have been what you were going for, but it is very cartoony; with little to no shading. The colors and shapes are fairly accurate, but it still needs a bit of depth to get that textured fur look! (use alternating hues when shading in fur)
2. The fur has a reddish whiteish tinge in the picture, but yours has a cool palette. I touched it up with a bit of red, brown, and white.
3. The eyes are very cartoony, but taking away a bit of the highlight and adding a few more colors to the mix fixes that. Use some slightly off colored rings around the eyes to make it look a bit more realistic!
4. The muzzle needed to be wider. A wide muzzle distinguishes between a cat and a dog, since felines have a thinner face than a dog and certain dogs have a slightly pear-shaped face.

Other than that, great job!  :y:

Can I bump this for a review? I'd really like some critique!

Pixel Art / Re: New to pixels so I made Hollow Knight
« on: February 08, 2017, 02:19:57 am »
It might just be me, but the image isn't showing up. Are you sure that it's the correct file?

Pixel Art / Re: Dinosword: Boss Animation (Critique Appreciated)
« on: February 08, 2017, 01:57:43 am »
It looks wonderful, but the jump animation could use a little bit of work. He begins the jump, teleports into mid-air, then finishes it. Maybe a few more frames in the middle? Other than that it's extremely well done! :y:


Thanks!  :)  (This is a very basic starter animation, wanted to test the program out)

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