How 'bout I go for that mockup idea then? 8D I learned a lot, so I think I can do something better now.

The orange is a tag; Not a door-handle. XD I suppose it's unreadable, huh?

Asymmetry is great for composition, but with a Pokemon center I think it's about readability rather than artistic license. I assume people, when playing a game, would be alienated by that.

XD Well, all PKMN Centers are asymmetrical.

See?

Either way, I'm going to take a closer look at your edit when it isn't 3-30 in the morning while I have a Chemistry /and/ a French final. I dunno, I was thinking of making other buildings, and perhaps reaching the point of making a mock-up or something.

HAHA~ The mart is red. XD That must be one of the beta screenshots. It's still asymmetrical, though. <:

You can make something big. But definitely not impressive if you're not willing to wait and take baby-steps.

I don't think it'd look like a game sprite at all.

Well, take the advice above first. And also, realize that the limbs are usually evenly-spaced; the same size. Your forearms are too short, upper arms to long, hand much too small, torso I think is too long, calves too small, no feet at all, really. Most of them were mentioned above while I was typing down this post. His right arm is also... a noodle. o___o I'm wondering where his elbow is. Ah, his thighs too thick, butt too low.

Uh, but if you're /really/ meaning to stick with this... -shrug- Here's some help. It's still anatomically incorrect, but it's a step in kinda the right direction.

Also, she's jailbait and shouldn't be saying such things on the internet.  *prude*

I didn't say what for. I'm sure we have a misunderstanding here. <:

It's sad that this piece is finally complete, however. I'm sure that, if this lasted a longer time, it would've received even more critique and would've gone... um, /above/ its already-supreme status?