Thanks for the feedback! 

I've tried to take what you said in to account and made a few changes



Do you think this looks better?

Here's my update

Thanks!

I'm not sure what to do with the background, as I don't want to make it too busy. A border might be a good idea though, do you have any ideas what might go well?

Thanks, I will look at that as well

Hi 

I'm working on a fairy tale based RPG and got some great help here a little while ago with my portraits. I have been working on a logo to use and would like some feedback. In case you are wondering the game is a turn based RPG with roguelike elements.

Here is what I have so far:



I'm happy with how Red looks and the font, but I'm really struggling with something to bring the darker side to it. I tried putting the shadow of a stalking wolf behind her, but my version just looked cheap. In this one I tried playing around with the font, but as you can see it does not look menacing.

I would really appreciate some feedback on how you think I could add that bit of "menacing" to this logo.

Thanks