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Pixel Art / Re: [Feedback] [CC] Bolero: Fantasy Tactics, pixel art
« on: December 03, 2019, 03:18:23 am »
Looks a lot clearer now!
I think the floor tiles are a bit too noisy.

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Pixel Art / Re: [Feedback][WIP] Sword Swing Animation
« on: October 07, 2019, 10:21:02 pm »
Yeah it feels better now.
His left foot stands out a bit to me. Having two positions instead of turning it every frame might look better... I think? But I'm just nitpicking now.

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Pixel Art / Re: [Feedback][WIP] Sword Swing Animation
« on: October 07, 2019, 07:57:59 pm »
I'd remove a couple of frames from the swing. It feels heavy and slow.

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Pixel Art / Re: I'd like some feedback on a grass tile.
« on: September 08, 2019, 07:15:28 pm »
Well the first one is just randomly placed pixels. Try to avoid that.

The second one is way better. There's less noise and you can see some purpose in the placement of the pixels. Still a bit random but there's some meaning.
Look for tilesets from games you like or just google "16x16 grass tile" and you will find lots of references and ideas.

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Pixel Art / Re: Mockup for a personal project.
« on: July 23, 2019, 11:24:10 pm »
You could improve the readability doing something like this

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Pixel Art / Re: Promo shots of characters for my next project
« on: July 07, 2019, 12:06:40 am »
The detail in the ear grabs too much attention, and the fact that the face is covered doesn't help.
It took me more than usual to know what was going on :P

I at least read the image way easier with these two little changes.


The sword arm looks a bit tiny I think? Or is it because of the foreshortening. It's a tricky thing to do in pixel art.

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Pixel Art / Re: [Feedback] [CC] Bolero: Fantasy Tactics, pixel art
« on: June 16, 2019, 03:12:45 pm »
Yeah I think it looks better now.
I can't avoid focusing my attention on the broken hair outlines but maybe I'm weird.

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Pixel Art / Re: Where do you guys get inspiration from?
« on: May 21, 2019, 09:29:18 pm »
Check out Pixel Dailies on Twitter. There's a theme to paint every day and you can see how a lot of other people approach it.

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Pixel Art / Re: Need help to improve my graphics!
« on: April 30, 2019, 09:43:17 pm »
Avoid separating each object with outlines. It takes space without giving any information and makes everything look detached from the surrounding objects (which can be useful sometimes I guess)

Reading this will help you: http://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=11299

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2D & 3D / Re: Short Film Shots
« on: April 03, 2019, 03:27:27 pm »
Great animation! Rotating hands must be a pain.

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