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Pixel Art / Re: Autumn - C64 Picture
« on: July 31, 2013, 12:20:25 pm »
I don't want to come over rude. And perhaps you guys just don't like my attitude. But I keep the picture now final as it is now. Adding a Horizon, gives me more updates, and I just like it this way with the Bay and the Path in full lenght. Ofcourse I got earlier the advice of the Horizon, but I want to end Autumn for now. ;)

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Pixel Art / Re: Autumn - C64 Picture
« on: July 30, 2013, 11:14:40 pm »
regarding Helm's comment and work, and Saimo's follup.. Here the updates
to the picture right now:

- drainpipe, couldn't make much of it, but did changes.
- bird on bottom left is still there only now without outlines.
- tiles are now in perspective, hope no mistakes?
- dog is more coloured.
- there came a new puppet walking, I pixeled it myself, maybe not that perfect.
- a fade to blue and purple in the back of the path.
- here and there some changes, the door, the window, the poop.
- bird on the tree, perhaps any better.

I know that you guys wanted the trees in a smaller size, or the house in
some other shape, but removing the house and trees I won't do. ;P

Should be final now? Or?

Not sure yet about the puppet/dog's shadow.

Btw. I better don't post one of my last pictures, Cool Alien, I made there
some road in perspective, and some friend said it was out of perspective,
even while the buildings have shadows to the front, the shadow on the alien
is on the left, while he also has sunlight in his glasses. The only way
you understand the picture, is.. Let's say, there two suns in the sky.
Bugjam/The Dreams said he also used once two suns in his SciFi Pics.......
No, better don't post it, Cool Alien is final. :)


Autumn V4.3:

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Pixel Art / Re: Autumn - C64 Picture
« on: July 30, 2013, 06:14:04 pm »
Helm:


Wonder what you did with that house, I think I still like my house better. However I do understand now the idea on the tiles, and I really want it this way too now as a last change, I see they are in Perspective, so if I fix my tiles in that way..and few pixels wrong is already out of perspective, the puppet you did, is amazingly better than mine, I won't steal it, as I have no means of stealing, I could loadup the PNG in Project1 to steal the puppet, but it's from your hand, so I won't steal. Could print the image, then copy the puppet, then still it is from your hand when I change him. The blue fade in the back, just doesn't appeal to me. I want to do two updates on the picture, that are the tiles in perspective and a new puppet walking there. Hope no faults happen. :)


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Pixel Art / Re: Autumn - C64 Picture
« on: July 29, 2013, 10:20:08 am »
Hey All,

I updated "Autumn" with the shadow at the path/from house, and made
the picture final (made it executable for CSDb), typed out an Comment
for CSDb, and I guess that Saimo will reply on the release of "Autumn",
upload somewhen this coming week. Still, thanks for those who helped
out with advice. :)

Autumn:

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Pixel Art / Re: Autumn - C64 Picture
« on: July 27, 2013, 05:45:59 pm »
I want to name it "FINAL", you must know, make the trees smaller, adding other sort of tiles, removing the house and make a new house, fix the shadows when I even think they're quite allright, all this stuff to do........What I want to say is, why doing heaps of work, and when the picture hits CSDb, then the Sceners just vote a 3, and a 5, and more 1's. And comment that it is just another dull picture by JSL, and it's crap. Getting an overall score of 5. And we just continue to the next pixel work which gets uploaded. It is, they don't like JSL. Like said, doing heaps of work on this picture just results in bad comments, bad downvotes, etc. - Just see when I upload it. I think doing the things to this picture, isn't worth it. When it hits CSDb, it will be another crap
picture like I am delivering all the time.

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Pixel Art / Re: Autumn - C64 Picture
« on: July 27, 2013, 01:05:13 pm »
So basically it is this:


-change perspective of the house
-reduce the size of the trees
-change the shadows of the trees
-change the tiles


Change the perspective of the house: Whats wrong with the house, I thought
the house now seems OK. Then also I don't want to resize the trees, I like
the trees how they are now. ;) And about the tiles: They are smaller in the
back and bigger infront, I don't know how to improve them, to me they're just
fine. Why everything must be perfect. And the shadows of the trees, again, are
just fine to call. I just have the feeling, the picture is final. And Saimo,
among others, say it isn't.

Even I don't know if it was good to join Pixelation, everything to push further
and further while I think it is Final, you guys know the difference, that some
things must be perfect.

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Pixel Art / Re: Autumn - C64 Picture
« on: July 26, 2013, 04:50:34 pm »
Like I said to Saimo on CSDb.. I will adjust the path from the house/shadow of the house. And to me this sounds, like "Autumn" is somehow to be stated "Final", I had in mind to add some Black on some leaves, but looking at how many leaves are at the ground, it is insane adding some Black pixels. Maybe the leaves are just fine here now.

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Pixel Art / Re: Autumn - C64 Picture
« on: July 26, 2013, 08:41:48 am »
Anarkhya:

A railroad is a good idea, and lots of work to implement in the path now. But, I don't know if you thought about it, when a Railroad is in the middle, it is a bit stupid having a pathway from the door of the house into the railroad. ;)

Johan

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Pixel Art / Re: Autumn - C64 Picture
« on: July 26, 2013, 01:23:19 am »
Somehow, I want to keep the trees. Also when there is a Horizon line: I don't want
to cut off the picture at that point, because the bay also would be gone etc.
Changes?

- the path infront the house got grey1 shadow
- the house got shortened on the roof giving better perspective?
- some holes in the pavement
- puddles of leaves near fence, trees and elsewhere

I would say I leave it like this, but I guess more must be done, or..

Johan aka JSL

ps: now I just saw the shadow of the path, is a bit too long..


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Pixel Art / Re: Autumn - C64 Picture
« on: July 25, 2013, 09:45:19 pm »
Hey all..

And I thought the picture was FINAL. I don't know how to angle down the trees.. Resize them? So, getting the shadows in place. And even with the "lines" from Helm, I want the drainpipe still in it, if I add that on top of the highest line, then the house looks quite small. I could ofcourse give it a try for second time, but maybe my second approach in adjusting things, might turn out wrongly. And actually, as graphician, I had in mind the picture was final. Help on pictures pixeling is appreciated, but even when I do the changes to this picture, the votes and comments on CSDb will be worse, with or without changes. Will loadup the picture now in Amica Paint.

Oh and whats wrong with the tiles, I just have bigger ones infront, and smaller ones in the back.

Johan aka JSL

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