Thanks for the edits and crits, it seems I have a lot of things to fix.

Only minor changes on these two:


Alex: I shifted the mouth around, but I'm not sure if that was the focus of your edit.
Frogacuda: Actually, the sword isn't supposed to be pointing at the viewer, it's just pointing flat, towards the side.
lief: I'll try to fix that along with the other arm problems, eventually.
Alex Hanson-White: Wow, great edit! It's very helpful, I've been comparing it to the original and attempting to fix issues with it.
Helm: Good points, I will take your advice to mind.
Locrian: Damn, those are some nice edits.
Again, thanks for the help!