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« on: November 10, 2017, 08:43:31 pm »
the house's perspective (exterior) looks okay to me. If anything, I'd suggest you work on giving it more contrast against the ground, esp. on the sides.
With your perspective, we shouldn't be able to see the details of the pillars when they're covered with a roof, but we should see some round top if they're indoor (just like with cupboards). Using your cubic-crate, you can also fix the "chairs" in the house: they should be able to fit a crate, and thus the height of their top surface should be ~ half of the width of the same surface.
pay attention to the contrast on the ground tiles (keep it low). This is no longer the case in the third interior picture, so we don't know if we're looking at some ground or some roof tiles anymore.
Finally, for the trees, try to sketch their overall shape first, with perspective-fixed "circles" centered and put at increasing heights.