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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Horiz shmup
« on: February 21, 2007, 09:55:59 pm »Was it intended to look like the city is being flooded?
Humm, no, it was supposed to be a frozen city with lots of snow around
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Humm, no, it was supposed to be a frozen city with lots of snow around
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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Horiz shmup
« on: February 21, 2007, 08:46:04 pm »
Hey again!
My edit as promised. Well I had some fun at least, been a while since I pixeled
Problem is I ended up with like a totaly different game/feel, sorry about that, but Iīm posting it anyways! 
I think I even managed to use colours that are allowed...
Cheers,
Lelle
My edit as promised. Well I had some fun at least, been a while since I pixeled
Problem is I ended up with like a totaly different game/feel, sorry about that, but Iīm posting it anyways! I think I even managed to use colours that are allowed...Cheers,
Lelle
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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Horiz shmup
« on: February 19, 2007, 10:36:14 pm »
Heya mice,
you got some really nice stuff here! Just wanted to point out some things. The wings on the enemies looks kind of jagged! I'm attaching a picture to show how to make it smoother, itīs way difficult to explain so hopefully the picture shows exactly how to do it. Maybe this added some effects you didn't want on your enemies though.
Also the upper foreground has something to it that doesnīt look quite right. The "rocks" seem to grow out of nowhere somehow. I think it would be nicer if you instead of a "cave" made a landscape and used the "frozen" setting on it that you were playing around with in one of the pictures. A vast frozen city in the background would be awesome I think!
I will try and make an edit when I get more time tomorrow and play around with it a bit. Keep up the great work, it already looks kickass and Iīm sure the game will be lotsa fun!!
Cheers,
Lelle
you got some really nice stuff here! Just wanted to point out some things. The wings on the enemies looks kind of jagged! I'm attaching a picture to show how to make it smoother, itīs way difficult to explain so hopefully the picture shows exactly how to do it. Maybe this added some effects you didn't want on your enemies though.
Also the upper foreground has something to it that doesnīt look quite right. The "rocks" seem to grow out of nowhere somehow. I think it would be nicer if you instead of a "cave" made a landscape and used the "frozen" setting on it that you were playing around with in one of the pictures. A vast frozen city in the background would be awesome I think!
I will try and make an edit when I get more time tomorrow and play around with it a bit. Keep up the great work, it already looks kickass and Iīm sure the game will be lotsa fun!!
Cheers,
Lelle
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Pixel Art / Re: [wip][nudity] Re-interpretation of old artstuffs
« on: December 01, 2006, 08:00:44 pm »
Heya,
First time Iīve seen the [nudity] tag actually!
Anyways, itīs looking very nice! Though her left breast(our right) is smaller than the other even though itīs closer to us. Also it seem as if she has a invisible bra on her since the breasts doesnīt seem to follow the law of gravity, though I guess itīs more likely she has "enhanced breasts"? One last thing is that it looks like she is about to fall, or even in the falling motion since the upper body and leg seem to be "on their way" already.
Looking forward to seeing more :]
Cheers,
Lelle
First time Iīve seen the [nudity] tag actually!
Anyways, itīs looking very nice! Though her left breast(our right) is smaller than the other even though itīs closer to us. Also it seem as if she has a invisible bra on her since the breasts doesnīt seem to follow the law of gravity, though I guess itīs more likely she has "enhanced breasts"? One last thing is that it looks like she is about to fall, or even in the falling motion since the upper body and leg seem to be "on their way" already.
Looking forward to seeing more :]
Cheers,
Lelle
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Pixel Art / Re: iso futuristic facility
« on: November 30, 2006, 01:00:37 pm »
Heya,
Been looking at this many times, guess itīs time to say something! All the places that you want to show to the viewer has lots of details and your eyes gets dragged to them, like the entrance and the venting system which is great. But then you got 3 panels on the wall that doesnīt seem to fill any special function, but since it makes the wall detailed it attracts my eyes but there is not much of interest there. Right now when I look at this picture I first see the venting system, then the entrance, then that shaded wall. I would much rather my eye went up to the radar or the tower first since that is a more important part of the structure.
I donīt know if I was able to explain what I meant too well, itīs nothing that destroys the picture for me I think itīs extraordinary, especially the venting system. And how where you ever able to write "Keep Out"(or isnīt it?) on that small space?! :] I too await the the completion of this work!
Cheers,
Lelle
Been looking at this many times, guess itīs time to say something! All the places that you want to show to the viewer has lots of details and your eyes gets dragged to them, like the entrance and the venting system which is great. But then you got 3 panels on the wall that doesnīt seem to fill any special function, but since it makes the wall detailed it attracts my eyes but there is not much of interest there. Right now when I look at this picture I first see the venting system, then the entrance, then that shaded wall. I would much rather my eye went up to the radar or the tower first since that is a more important part of the structure.
I donīt know if I was able to explain what I meant too well, itīs nothing that destroys the picture for me I think itīs extraordinary, especially the venting system. And how where you ever able to write "Keep Out"(or isnīt it?) on that small space?! :] I too await the the completion of this work!
Cheers,
Lelle
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Pixel Art / Re: Amorphous [WIP]
« on: November 30, 2006, 10:37:20 am »
Heya,
Some small things; his left hand, the one closest to us is much smaller than the hand far away from us. Also the closest arm bends in 4 places while the other bends in 3 places. Maybe they are supposed to be joint-less though? If so I think they could be smoother.
It's a fantastic piece of work I say, beautiful and imaginative! :]
Cheers,
Lelle
Some small things; his left hand, the one closest to us is much smaller than the hand far away from us. Also the closest arm bends in 4 places while the other bends in 3 places. Maybe they are supposed to be joint-less though? If so I think they could be smoother.
It's a fantastic piece of work I say, beautiful and imaginative! :]
Cheers,
Lelle
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Pixel Art / Re: Spider (newcomer drawing)
« on: November 28, 2006, 11:03:57 pm »
Looking very nice! I hate spiders though, gives me the creeps :]
AA = Anti Aliazing. Take the "S" on the right. Itīs not exactly smooth is it? Then look at the left "S"where I have added one other colour(the other 2 colours mixed together) in between the two colours, in the places that requires it make to look smoother.
Oh and many that are new donīt know that you can zoom in on the pictures if you left-click it, then shift+left-click to zoom out. Just letting you know in case you forgot! :]
Cheers,
Lelle
AA = Anti Aliazing. Take the "S" on the right. Itīs not exactly smooth is it? Then look at the left "S"where I have added one other colour(the other 2 colours mixed together) in between the two colours, in the places that requires it make to look smoother.
Oh and many that are new donīt know that you can zoom in on the pictures if you left-click it, then shift+left-click to zoom out. Just letting you know in case you forgot! :]
Cheers,
Lelle
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Pixel Art / Re: EVIL CARNIVAL (WIP) HELP! :)
« on: November 28, 2006, 08:18:01 pm »
Heya,
The face closest to us doesnīt look like it belongs in the picture, it has got too much of the reference in it I think, somehow I think it looks "too real".
Itīs a fantastic piece of art Iīd say :]
Cheers,
Lelle
The face closest to us doesnīt look like it belongs in the picture, it has got too much of the reference in it I think, somehow I think it looks "too real".
Itīs a fantastic piece of art Iīd say :]
Cheers,
Lelle
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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] SHMUP Title Screen
« on: November 28, 2006, 07:44:34 pm »
Like this?
I like it too actually. Gah! Decisions... :]
Edit: with the help of sharprm I have come up with a new face for him!
I like it too actually. Gah! Decisions... :]
Edit: with the help of sharprm I have come up with a new face for him!
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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] SHMUP Title Screen
« on: November 28, 2006, 07:23:14 pm »
Yea Iīm not too good with colours, need to read that colour-thread again! :|
Another update. Will be 176x208 pixels from now on:
Changed the explosion into a burning fire instead, looked too "cartoonish" I think.
Cheers,
Lelle
Another update. Will be 176x208 pixels from now on:
Changed the explosion into a burning fire instead, looked too "cartoonish" I think.
Cheers,
Lelle