Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: noname on February 27, 2010, 04:18:31 am

Title: [WIP] Anatomy at all
Post by: noname on February 27, 2010, 04:18:31 am
hello everyone! as the topic's name says, i have some problems with painting people (cartoonish or not). I hope that someone can explain well, how can i fix my simple character. it's better to show on a sketch, please, cause it might be hard for me to understand just from words.
and if you need, here is the description of the character: he is stout a little, he wears a cap, a sweater, and jeans with a belt.

please, just show me how it must be :)

(http://i009.radikal.ru/1002/fb/ce5fb488a9ff.bmp)
Title: Re: [WIP] Anatomy at all
Post by: snakesqzns on February 27, 2010, 04:49:05 am
I would try to starting on much larger pieces first.  Working at this size is a lot more difficult.
Title: Re: [WIP] Anatomy at all
Post by: 7321551 on February 27, 2010, 05:52:33 am
Did you put effort into this? Sorry, but this seems like an attempt to get free edits. Oh well, in any case, it worked.

(http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr257/xv8w1h0s/ce5fb488a9ff-edit.gif)

The animation dwells on step 2 because that's what I think you should try. the flaws become more visible & easier to resolve.

Anyway, you've only been posting things in 1-bit, which is probably making things harder than they need to be. Have you seen a lot of good b&w pixel art?

Title: Re: [WIP] Anatomy at all
Post by: noname on February 27, 2010, 06:22:18 am
thank you so much.
no, i don't want to get free edits, i want to understand in what way i must work.
and i don't think that he will be b&w, i just don't know how even to sketch him)

thanks again, i will work on it.
Title: Re: [WIP] Anatomy at all
Post by: 7321551 on February 27, 2010, 01:48:31 pm
No problem, sorry if I sounded mean, good luck.  :)