Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Tourist on February 21, 2010, 11:41:36 pm
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There's not much originality in a character mashup, but I need the practice at doing figures.
(http://www.ixdrive.co.uk/img/6ed3e7ece6a1223a36950db522b606df.png)
(http://www.ixdrive.co.uk/img/2a5f1292db0e01f619cfa27dd06c053c.png)
C +C welcome. I don't think I've got the legs correct. Maybe push the hue shift on the color ramps too?
Tourist
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Those solid green eyes need tweaking, they're too .. solid. ish. Something like that. Try throwing in a highlight. Anyways, a good start, but the colors aren't very interesting, and there are some general contrast issues. Your color ramps are completely straight and don't have much reusage/interaction between ramps. Try reusing a dark color in more than one area, for example. Also, feet are disproportionate to the rest of the body. General pose is alright, though
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Thanks for the feedback. I followed your advice and adjusted the eyes and focused on improving the colors. There's also a few tweaks to the shape here and there.
(http://www.ixdrive.co.uk/img/1cdba0e308b3a1e4cd95902a7109eff7.png)
The legs and feet are still a bit of a mess, maybe the lower edge of the skirt too. Should the fold in the skirt rise all the way to the opposite hip?
Tourist
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her right arm at the shoulder seems to be very extruded. Is it intentional?
as for the left leg, maybe raise the foot a little? the right hand also kind of looks like an explosion to me, but maybe im just crazy =P
Looks good though.
Keep it up =)