Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: acidic055 on March 22, 2006, 12:05:41 pm
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Hey it's me again lol. anyways, heres a piece of my latest work and i was wondering what you thought about it. Also how could i improve it...something seems...missing...
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v736/acidic055/homunculus2.png)(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v736/acidic055/homunculus.png)
~Tony
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Nice design. If you're looking to jazz it up, then you could always animate. I personally would add a glowing effect to it. Kinda like when Ed uses his alchemy.
(http://images.tfaw.com/coversp/J/JUL053960F.jpg)
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Of course, with the animation fad going on right now... We wholly encourage animation.
But besides that:
The piece is nice, but more hue variation, plus another light source opposite of the main one with an opposite hue could make this more interesting.
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Okay, thanks guys ill see what i can do on the lines of animation...ill be working on that.
But for now, heres another one ive been working on, ITS GLUTTONY! This was mostly a practice with AA and "selout" Any suggestions? (Btw this topic will be used for my Full Metal Alchemist pixles)
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v736/acidic055/gluttony2.png)(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v736/acidic055/gluttony.png)
~Tony
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I like the Gluttony peice but I think the shading on the hands needs work. I don't really understand the lines going down the arms. And I think it would be cool if he had food surrounding him.
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(http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/Animation/hagaren/chara/gluttony01.jpg)
Thats gluttony... ive noticed 1 thing...HIS HEAD IS WAY TOO BIG!! oh well...thats another thing to change =P