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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: SirSami on February 05, 2010, 07:35:26 pm

Title: RPG character template
Post by: SirSami on February 05, 2010, 07:35:26 pm

Hi! I am currently working on character template. First of all I am going to finish the front view of sprite before moving to other directions. If you have something to say about please feel free to comment or give me criticue about of my work ;)

(http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/5449/spritetemp.png)

Title: Re: RPG character template
Post by: blumunkee on February 06, 2010, 07:42:13 am

I'll go ahead and be the first to point you to the obligatory muscle baby thread. I have nothing to add that hasn't been said there.

http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=7301.0

Title: Re: RPG character template
Post by: SirSami on February 21, 2010, 10:54:53 am

Thanks for the link! Newest version of sprite: (http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/5449/spritetemp.png)

Title: Re: RPG character template
Post by: NaCl on February 21, 2010, 12:51:14 pm

MOOOOOOAAARRRR BEEEEEEFFF!! In grand musclebaby tradition you need to hulk this guy out, really get his muscles up to a point of immobility. Like thus:

(http://i48.tinypic.com/2vki34l.png)

In all seriousness, I tried to improve your palette, and give him more definition. Don't take him to the point I did, but this is no clay soldier! Get rid of the straight lines running along his body and define his muscles at least a little bit, if that's what you're going for.