Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: HC_Bret_Measor on January 31, 2010, 01:59:08 pm

Title: Logo Design
Post by: HC_Bret_Measor on January 31, 2010, 01:59:08 pm

Hey Everyone, I'm new here and this is my first attempt at a pixel logo. The font is my own design too. I'm open for any C&C as this is an area in my pixel work I really want to improve on.

Thanks for your time,

(http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/746/logosamplev3.png)
By <a target="_new" href="http://profile.imageshack.us/user/redthunder69">redthunder69[/url] at 2010-01-31

Title: Re: Logo Design
Post by: .TakaM on January 31, 2010, 02:21:17 pm

I think you should make the bottom half of the h as tall as the other lowercase letters.

Title: Re: Logo Design
Post by: HC_Bret_Measor on January 31, 2010, 10:14:43 pm

Quote from: .TakaM on January 31, 2010, 02:21:17 pm

I think you should make the bottom half of the h as tall as the other lowercase letters.

I tried to make the lower case "h" work with the height line of the other lower case letters however the "h" looked even more out of place.
I think next time I will definitely take the extra time to draw it out freehand to make sure all the lettering works together.