Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Perihelion on December 23, 2009, 05:14:34 pm

Title: Necromancer [WIP]
Post by: Perihelion on December 23, 2009, 05:14:34 pm
Anatomy is a huge weak point of mine, so I figured I'd post this for critique before I get farther and work some fundamental mistake into the piece.

Obviously I haven't really done any cleanup yet except a bit on the armor.

The figure:

Title: Re: Necromancer [WIP]
Post by: Pawige on December 23, 2009, 07:16:24 pm
Right now I think you should work on the pose and the proportions. I think the far leg is looking a little gimpy. The perspective on it is a bit confusing, and the pose is a bit "flyswatted." This (http://www.itchstudios.com/psg/art_tut.htm#line_art) is an excellent page with a ton of helpful tips. I've linked it to the section that mentions flyswatting with a little sketch. Very useful! I like the idea behind this piece, hope you get it finished!