Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Perihelion on December 23, 2009, 05:14:34 pm
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Anatomy is a huge weak point of mine, so I figured I'd post this for critique before I get farther and work some fundamental mistake into the piece.
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v325/ViridianMoon/anatar02-7.png)
Obviously I haven't really done any cleanup yet except a bit on the armor.
The figure:
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v325/ViridianMoon/anatar02-8.png)
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Right now I think you should work on the pose and the proportions. I think the far leg is looking a little gimpy. The perspective on it is a bit confusing, and the pose is a bit "flyswatted." This (http://www.itchstudios.com/psg/art_tut.htm#line_art) is an excellent page with a ton of helpful tips. I've linked it to the section that mentions flyswatting with a little sketch. Very useful! I like the idea behind this piece, hope you get it finished!