Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Gamecid on December 09, 2009, 11:31:57 pm

Title: An abomination. would like some critique
Post by: Gamecid on December 09, 2009, 11:31:57 pm

Here is an animation I've been working on a while.

(http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/3011/abomination4.gif) (http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/5673/abomination0002big.png)

Title: Re: An abomination. would like some critique
Post by: NaCl on December 11, 2009, 09:13:02 am

Hey I like this, it's pretty cool. The main critique I have is of the animation: it is not purposeful at all. It's like you drew a cool image, then decided to animate it. Perhaps you made the brain pulse, that's cool. Then the rest looked kind of static so you made other random bits move around. But that thought process is apparent in the final product, it is just little things moving around independently, no cohesive or purposeful animating was done.

Title: Re: An abomination. would like some critique
Post by: Gamecid on December 12, 2009, 01:12:49 pm

Quote from: NaCl on December 11, 2009, 09:13:02 am

Hey I like this, it's pretty cool. The main critique I have is of the animation: it is not purposeful at all. It's like you drew a cool image, then decided to animate it. Perhaps you made the brain pulse, that's cool. Then the rest looked kind of static so you made other random bits move around. But that thought process is apparent in the final product, it is just little things moving around independently, no cohesive or purposeful animating was done.

Thanks for the feedback. You were spot on about my thinking. :crazy:
I'll keep that in mind in the future.