Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Ipsen on November 16, 2009, 05:01:07 pm

Title: Monk
Post by: Ipsen on November 16, 2009, 05:01:07 pm

This is a medieval monk, I need the help to understand that with him wrong.

(http://st.free-lance.ru/users/Ipsen/upload/f_4b0186bdc69d1.gif)
(http://st.free-lance.ru/users/Ipsen/upload/f_4b0186bdd4c60.gif)
(http://st.free-lance.ru/users/Ipsen/upload/f_4b0186bdd5fea.gif)

Title: Re: Monk
Post by: circuscommando on November 17, 2009, 03:25:59 am

there seems to be too much head bob, he appears to be taking a deep breath with every breath.

Title: Re: Monk
Post by: Pixelized on November 17, 2009, 04:41:59 am

As already mentioned, too much head bob... though it doesn't look like he's taking a deep breath because there is no chest movement, the entire torso simply moves up and down by a pixel or two. maybe some expansion in the chest would make it more readable. Right now he looks like Quagmire doing his little head thing...


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