Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Tremulant on March 07, 2006, 09:49:13 pm
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It's a Donut... eating his baby...
(http://h1.ripway.com/tremulant/doughnut.png)
Disgusting. :P
11 colours; C&C appreciated.:)
EDIT:
New image link. Old host screwed up.
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Exellent pallette use, not really my cup of colours, but it has a very nice feel, got just some suggestions.
-Maybe give it a highlight to the coffe and shoes
-Maybe Coffee driping from the donut.
-If you are presenting the piece with frame and background, maybe you could AA it to the background.
Great work man, really ;)
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How errie, never thought I'd see this horrific event of nature... teh eating of bebis! I agree with Chris though, since you used a frame, AA'ing the sprite to the background would be great. Personally I like flatly shaded sprites, however if you did add a shine you would have to mute it alot. Anyways the details on your sprite are excellent, good AA, good folds, etc. It'd be funny to see the 'father' have a bite taken outta his head from a past cannabilistic experience! ^.^u
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you're wasting all your dark shades besides the blue higest one, I think. And your closest to white isn't very distinguishable either. Otherwise this is cool.
edit:
(http://www.locustleaves.com/doughnut.png) (http://files.upl.silentwhisper.net/upload1/doughnut.png)
9 colours now, more palette representation, unified, AAed to background as suggested to see how it looks, lightening of the outlines locational by lightsource, some dithering ideas, a shadow?
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Thanks for the crits guys. I did and edit based on your advice:
(http://h1.ripway.com/tremulant/Dnut.png)
Unfortunately I did the bulk of the work before seeing Helm's awesome edit (which purts my pallette to shame again :D),
so there are probably still color issues... I tried to AA it to the background, though, and took a chunk out of the big guy's head (You were right, Dhaos, I think it adds some character).
I changed some other stuff too, like the shape of the right (our right) foot, and some of the folds/highlights... and probably some other stuff that I've forgotten.
Hooray!
EDIT:
looking at it, I think the bite looks... off. It wouldn't If I could draw, but... hmm...
EDIT (again):
Imade and edit of my edit based on Helm's edit... edited...
(http://h1.ripway.com/tremulant/dnut2.png)
Down to 8 colours :D
*Edited due to hosting problems*
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had to do an edit.
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v81/Marshy/Dnutalex.gif)
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Ahhhh! It is a deseased zombie donut-man! :O
I can't give any crits on this work, good job!
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had to do an edit.
He's so... purple! :D I like your shadow better than mine, the dithering's a nice touch.
Anyhoo... Thanks for all the comments, guys! I think I'm about finished with this guy for now, unless there's something horribly wrong that I'm still missing. Appreciate all your help!
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The new pic shows a lot of improvement, great job. (was waiting a few days till I could actually view the image XD) Now I want a donut really badly. Damn pixels!