Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Lid on March 07, 2006, 02:19:21 pm

Title: Isometric furniture (kitchen)
Post by: Lid on March 07, 2006, 02:19:21 pm: (http://www.ljplus.ru/img/b/l/blackard/kitchen.gif)
This is my first pixel work.
Title: Re: Isometric furniture (kitchen)
Post by: Lyuf on March 07, 2006, 02:27:20 pm: I like this :) It is very good for first work...
Title: Re: Isometric furniture (kitchen)
Post by: Chris on March 08, 2006, 12:43:24 am: Solid work, im really diggin it.

-One of the first things that comes to mind is that only the table and chair cast shadows....what about the rest of furniture?
-I would up the contrast a tad

Great work.

PD: what´s the deal with that chair ?
Title: Re: Isometric furniture (kitchen)
Post by: Lid on March 08, 2006, 11:49:37 am: Thanks for comments.
I still don't know how to put all shadows. I've made shadows for table and chairs only, because they looked like flying above the floor.
Anyway, I'll learn this problem in my future works.
Title: Re: Isometric furniture (kitchen)
Post by: vierbit on March 08, 2006, 12:21:06 pm: This is indeed very good for the first pixelart.
I made a quick edit.
(http://hometown.aol.de/Fabian%20HBS/fkfftg/kitchen_edit.gif)
The ground looks some kind of blurry.
use more contrast there.

The furnitue looks like they fly over the ground
so use a darker shade to fix it.
Title: Re: Isometric furniture (kitchen)
Post by: hawken on March 09, 2006, 06:29:33 am: Quote from: Lid on March 08, 2006, 11:49:37 am
Thanks for comments.
I still don't know how to put all shadows. I've made shadows for table and chairs only, because they looked like flying above the floor.
Anyway, I'll learn this problem in my future works.

under the cuboards and under the windowsil?
Title: Re: Isometric furniture (kitchen)
Post by: goosemonger on March 09, 2006, 07:00:49 am: Why is there a dryer in the kitchen?
Title: Re: Isometric furniture (kitchen)
Post by: Andy Tran on March 09, 2006, 07:43:13 am: Stunning! The floor tiles and other tiles were positioned in good perspective.
Title: Re: Isometric furniture (kitchen)
Post by: Krizmo on March 09, 2006, 10:15:43 am: Quote from: goosemonger on March 09, 2006, 07:00:49 am
Why is there a dryer in the kitchen?
rofl, I didn't notice that at the start. It seems to jsut kind of fit in with the rest of the picture though. I do't mind it, nice work.
Title: Re: Isometric furniture (kitchen)
Post by: Lid on March 09, 2006, 10:57:43 am: Quote from: goosemonger on March 09, 2006, 07:00:49 am
Why is there a dryer in the kitchen?

There isn't any dryer in the kitchen. :), There are a stove and a washing machine.
Title: Re: Isometric furniture (kitchen)
Post by: mikembley on March 09, 2006, 01:53:07 pm: I'd say use the window as a light source, and the palette imo suck's.. It's too bright
Title: Re: Isometric furniture (kitchen)
Post by: hawken on March 09, 2006, 07:31:49 pm: Quote from: goosemonger on March 09, 2006, 07:00:49 am
Why is there a dryer in the kitchen?

lol nice 2nd post!

Practically everyone I know has a washing machine in thier kitchen, where else do you put it?
Title: Re: Isometric furniture (kitchen)
Post by: Lid on March 10, 2006, 09:04:29 am: Quote
Practically everyone I know has a washing machine in thier kitchen, where else do you put it?

Is the furniture placement so important for a pixel art picture? Next time I'll draw a brazier in a bedroom. ;D