Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Pessanha on September 12, 2009, 03:36:13 pm

Title: Master Kame
Post by: Pessanha on September 12, 2009, 03:36:13 pm

I made a tribute to a character that made my childhood happier! ;D

(http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5757/kamefinalpng.png)

Tell me what you guys think (:

Title: Re: Master Kame
Post by: thedaemon on September 13, 2009, 07:36:41 pm

Looks good but the black outlines would look better shaded.

Title: Re: Master Kame
Post by: adcrusher524 on September 13, 2009, 11:23:34 pm

(http://i520.photobucket.com/albums/w328/adcrusher/MasterRoji.png)

I did a small edit on the shades. I hope it helps.

Title: Re: Master Kame
Post by: Emtch on September 14, 2009, 08:12:49 pm

There are lots of jagged lines that would look better with a touch of AA, you should be able to do that with the colors you already have.

Title: Re: Master Kame
Post by: HanClinto on September 14, 2009, 09:19:13 pm

The collar feels fairly flat, like the cloth doesn't actually overlap the shirt.

Specifically where the shadowed texture of the shirt crosses the collar line is where this is most noticable.  I've highlighted those areas in red:
(http://hanclinto.com/dav/Clint/PBE/PSK/MasterRojiNotice.png)

The green outline is an example of where you very clearly made the cloths appear to be overlapping.

--clint