Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: IvanX on September 06, 2009, 01:07:43 am

Title: [WIP] Lil' Red [UPDATE] {NUDITY}
Post by: IvanX on September 06, 2009, 01:07:43 am

Picture the innocent symbolic character that is little red riding hood. Give her a sinister personality and the skill of a demon hunter and you have what I was hoping to acomplish.

(http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/8104/lilred.png)

My first attemp to make pixel art while keeping the color count down.(9 counting transparancy)
I plan to make a few mock-up scenes for this, but first I need to get the character sprite down.

Pixelation, do your worst. *Braces self*

Title: Re: [WIP] Lil' Red
Post by: Seele07 on September 06, 2009, 05:20:07 am

Hey, that's a good idea for a character (and possible story)  ;D .

I don't see much errors here. Except from the Face; it's hard to read. And to me, her legs are bended too much - or in other words: she goes too much down on her knees  ;) .

As i said before: Good Idea and a good realisation.

Greetings,
Ingo

Title: Re: [WIP] Lil' Red
Post by: Emtch on September 06, 2009, 07:12:38 am

9 colors, but I only see about 6. You need more contrast, or you could remove a few unnecessary colors.
Also, the body structure looks off, especially the legs. They're too short and look like they could break any second.

Title: Re: [WIP] Lil' Red UPDATE
Post by: IvanX on September 06, 2009, 10:25:04 pm

Ok I remade the legs and removed the hood to define her face more.

(http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/9964/lilred2.png)

The only drawback was the color count was bounced up to ten colors.

[Edit]

noticed the torso was to long and the arms to short. -fixed.

(http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/6972/lilred3.png)

(http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/2949/lilredmug.png)

also mugshot

Title: Re: [WIP] Lil' Red [UPDATE]
Post by: ProblemOfficer? on September 09, 2009, 08:36:32 pm

Awesome sprite and awesome idea. Only thing I could say is I thought her legs were too chunky. I did some work on them and I think I arrived at some sweet legs.
(http://i913.photobucket.com/albums/ac334/ivanphotobucket00/lilred2EDIT.png)

-Ivan

EDIT*** I used the top sprite instead of your fixed one... oops. I still like my legs though.

Title: Re: [WIP] Lil' Red [UPDATE]
Post by: IvanX on September 16, 2009, 04:58:56 am

Remade the sprite since overall style seemed awkward to me.

(http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/7357/newlilred.png)

Starting for basics again. (also playing with colors abit ;D)
C+C before I add the details and clothes.

Title: Re: [WIP] Lil' Red [UPDATE] {NUDITY}
Post by: infinitegames on September 16, 2009, 06:43:15 am

I like the 2nd version best.I think you should go back to that and perfect it.