Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: PixelPowa on August 31, 2009, 10:26:27 pm
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(http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/1310/wolf2t.png)
We are currently working on a anime horror game with were wolfs vampires and demons we have quite a bit done but we want your views on our work so far
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Torso on the vampire is too long, legs should be longer, I say.
Both are a bit pillow-shady. Where's the light source?
There's a lot of jaggedness throughout both, eg the werewolf's head/face, vamp's pants. You have strong shadow cutting into highlight.
The werewolf's arm on our left has some problems around the wrist. What's happening there? It looks way too thin.
Here's a bit of an edit I did on the vamp. I noticed your palette has a number of very similar colours that could be merged, 3 of which are near-blacks.
(http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z212/gastrop0d/edits/wolf2t_ed.png)