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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Opacus on August 13, 2009, 01:12:10 am

Title: Tiny Creek
Post by: Opacus on August 13, 2009, 01:12:10 am

Got workin on this a short while ago. Just really felt like drawing some pretty nature stuff.
 And it's also a good practice, since water isn't exactly the easiest thing to draw.

(http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/5571/creek7.gif)

It's quite heavy on the colours. Currently 29, not passing 32.
But I feel it's nescassery to really make this as lively as possible.

These two here are my most prominent references.
http://fc00.deviantart.com/fs48/i/2009/189/3/e/Otter_Creek_by_TimLaSure.jpg
http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs49/f/2009/207/a/6/forest_creek_by_evil_goma.png

C&C much apreciated :D

Title: Re: Tiny Creek
Post by: Dyble on August 13, 2009, 01:31:18 am

Only crit I have would be Rocks near water usally have loads of green long moss, Or they have slippery algie(spelt that wrong I bet)
It's hard to really Crit it because its not fully shaded yet and some spots are still very rough but from what looks done to me looks exellent.

Title: Re: Tiny Creek
Post by: Mush on August 13, 2009, 02:00:22 am

I think the cyan highlights on the water stand out a bit much, but I'm liking the way you rendered the water.

Title: Re: Tiny Creek
Post by: Scribblette on August 13, 2009, 02:32:57 am

Can't judge it yet, what is done looks lovely - water highlights included. I can't tell yet for sure either, but something seems a little skewy about the perspective smack bang in the middle of the scene (southwest of trunk, east of the waterfall) - could be intended?