Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Aoi on February 14, 2006, 08:49:52 pm
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First, hi to all! I'm new in this forums and my first topic go to the acclaimed King Of Spriters '06. C&C are welcome ^^
Portrait:
(http://www.michifu.com/Pyros/Portrait_Pyros.gif)
Character:
(http://www.michifu.com/Pyros/01_firearms.gif)
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The portrait may be too big.
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Nice cartoony design and colors, 'tis pretty. It looks a bit weird that his head is on fire, but it casts no light on it's surroundings (shading on the shoulders and arm should change accordingly, if you decide to do this). And maybe you could try adding a little transition between the fire and the skin on his neck.
The hand on the portrait looks broken, it's too twisted downward, and the finger is lacking a few "segments". Maybe rotate the hand away from us, or up a bit.
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It's not fire on his head, it's only a mask, If the head was on fire I would have animated it. Thanks for the comments, I'll work on the structure of the hand.
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I edited the portrait..
(http://www.michifu.com/Pyros/portrait_2.gif)
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Nice!!! :D
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Please don't post when all you have to say is 'nice!!! ::D'. This is a critique-based forum, please make an effort to discuss the art in some detail when you post. Further one-liners will be deleted.