Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Opacus on February 09, 2006, 02:49:38 pm

Title: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships
Post by: Opacus on February 09, 2006, 02:49:38 pm

(http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/3715/threeships8cg.gif)
For a game I'm making with gamemaker.
13 colours including transperacey.

C&C apreciated.

Title: Re: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships
Post by: Dhaos on February 09, 2006, 06:44:44 pm

Neat ship designs. I like the middle one the most. Are you going to be making a mockup with them soon?

Title: Re: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships
Post by: Opacus on February 09, 2006, 07:28:41 pm

I might do that, yes.
But I´m having some problem with nature objects.
I´m very bad at trees and rocks and stuff.
Furthermore, I AM actually making a game with these,
I´m working on it right now.

Title: Re: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships
Post by: Razz on February 10, 2006, 04:44:44 am

The third one looks odd. Like it has more defined outlines than the other two. It's pretty much shaded differently too, methinks.

Title: Re: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships
Post by: Opacus on February 10, 2006, 07:00:26 am

Probably cause it has some more round forms.

Title: Re: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships
Post by: nvision on February 10, 2006, 03:27:05 pm

I love the designs, but I think your contrast is a little low.  This is making the ships looks a little flattened out and grey...  If you just increase the range between colours, they should really "pop" more with a lot of depth.

Title: Re: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships
Post by: Andy Tran on February 11, 2006, 05:46:43 am

 Nice sihps you made there. The ships would need more conttrast, yes. Since metallic surfaces are applied, they should have high contrast and less shades.

Title: Re: Vertical shooter-Three battle ships
Post by: Scuba Steve on February 11, 2006, 06:57:08 pm

(http://www.doomworld.com/gbd2/misc/swolfedit.png)

I agree with the posts calling for more contrast.  I did an edit with just a bit of a contrast hike and I added a bit of white around the edges.