Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: KuroRyuzaki on March 25, 2009, 08:30:01 pm

Title: Could any of you spare some C&C?
Post by: KuroRyuzaki on March 25, 2009, 08:30:01 pm
Well a friend of mine fixed up my standing stance but i was to new to see how good it was compared to what I did so I deicded to animate it now id like some C&C thanks.

(http://i43.tinypic.com/53sjmd.png)

(http://i42.tinypic.com/303e8fk.gif)

Its a bit jagged but that's because of my animating programme sorry.^_^

Here's some other work i need help on but mainly i need to get my base fixed so id apprentice any C&C.

(http://i40.tinypic.com/wb3o7b.png)
Title: Re: Could any of you spare some C&C?
Post by: Dr D on March 25, 2009, 08:44:27 pm
He looks like he's doing the 2-step, lol.

Well first of all, I don't think your standing stance can really be used in the walking animation. If it has to be that way, consider changing the standing stance to something that can be used, both of the feet will probably be pointing forward. I think you need more insight on how a walk works (no offense). Are 3 or 4 frames all you have? If so, you're just going to have to use the high-points of each phase in the walk, and the contact phase for the in-between frame.

Not sure if I explained myself correctly. Besides, I'm not great at all these animation thingies, so wait for someone more experienced to chime in.
Title: Re: Could any of you spare some C&C?
Post by: LMR on March 25, 2009, 09:02:26 pm
Like Dr D already mentioned your character's walking animation looks more like dancing.

Here's a small edit I quickly made, it should give you a some kind of direction.  :)
(http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/9092/edit.gif)
(http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7448/edit.png)
Title: Re: Could any of you spare some C&C?
Post by: KuroRyuzaki on March 25, 2009, 09:03:43 pm
im afraid id like to keep it 2 framed there are many reason for that i cant really explain it  but il try fixing up his feet
Title: Re: Could any of you spare some C&C?
Post by: KuroRyuzaki on March 25, 2009, 09:13:57 pm
(http://i44.tinypic.com/akxsag.png)

I seem to have messed it up...
Title: Re: Could any of you spare some C&C?
Post by: ptoing on March 25, 2009, 10:21:50 pm
Please use [img] tags around the direct links to the picture. Not some html code linking to tinypic. That way people can't properly zoom into stuff using the script on pixelation (clicking on images).
I edited your posts for you to correct this.
Title: Re: Could any of you spare some C&C?
Post by: KuroRyuzaki on March 25, 2009, 11:05:00 pm
Thank you il try not to do that again ;D