Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Matriax on January 29, 2006, 02:42:22 pm
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Hello,
This is the mockup for a new remake, and few animations.
http://www.speccy.org/remakesgraph/alibebe/ali.htm
C+C plz
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Very nice graphics !
I like the animations , Can't really cirts them since they are too good for me :)
-Abdullah
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looks great man! The only thing that bugs me is the animated boulder. The light soucre shouldn't be rolling along with it should it?
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Thanks for the comments :)
Blink,
About you critique is correct, the light source should be quiet, and the lines,texture.. rotate. But for the moment i only make a static rock, and the programer animate by code.
I can make various frames to animate the rock or changue que light source to center :) .
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I agree on the critique on the boulder animation, the light-source shouldn't change... but if it's a programmer limitation, whatever then. The tiles all look quite good. I specially like the walls, the pit with the metal web, the carpet and the key on the top-right (looks the best), and the boulder looks ok too if not animated :).
The scorpion looks too flat, even with the ground shadow: try darkening that shadow and/or adding more shades, or playing with its contrast. That dwarf-face thing (in the top middle), doesn't quite fit in the "dungeon" style, it's too cartoony. And is that a milk bottle? In a dungeon... ok :)
Good luck with the remake!
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The non-animated boulder has light source at top right? Keys, keyholes and other stuff has light source at top left? Just if you use the non-animated boulder, flip it so it gets a right light spot.. ;9
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Awesome work Matriax. Remakes are great. Those scorpions look like metallic scorpions eh? They could use more contrast to make them appear more metallic.
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turbo,
dwarf-face is the protagonist, and yes is cartonish, is the look i want :) . The bottle of milk is the gun of the character jeje.
FireFly,
I thin i will change the light of the boulder to center and all ok :P
Andy Tran,
Jeje and other people say me the scorpion have too much light... well for the moment i thin the scorpion is well, and for the finish i view he overall of the remake and, i increse the ligh or no , thanks for the coment.
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Well, that sounds good, whatever not just top right :P
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This is the new graphic:
(http://www.speccy.org/remakesgraph/alibebe/lampf1.gif)
And here you can view the lamp in the mockup and all the progress :)
http://www.speccy.org/remakesgraph/alibebe/lampf1.gif
And now i making this:
(http://www.speccy.org/remakesgraph/alibebe/chup.gif)
I d'ont like the rounded part (last image of the right) any comment?
C+C plz