Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: balls01 on February 23, 2009, 01:05:13 pm

Title: new avy for pixelation
Post by: balls01 on February 23, 2009, 01:05:13 pm
heyall,

i was inspired by ptoings new works in the pink palette challenge (i forgot the actual color name).

and so after half an hour, i came up with

(http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/8034/ptoingy.png)
hey lollige, look at my beard, its sooo good.

please c+c  :)
Title: Re: new avy for pixelation
Post by: platnium on February 23, 2009, 06:33:54 pm
The nose looks like it is off to the right. Also the mouth looks pretty tiny.
Title: Re: new avy for pixelation
Post by: McClaneGames on March 02, 2009, 11:04:10 pm
Yeah, the nose is really throwing it off, and where are your pupils?
Title: Re: new avy for pixelation
Post by: huZba on March 03, 2009, 04:35:14 pm
There's a strong yellow color cast in the image. Try to introduce some colder colors in the mix to make the palette more interesting. Even when doing something weird like this it's good to know face construction. Give emphasis to cheeckbones, the chin and the eyes. Try and almost follow the real shapes but not quite to make it feel more familiar, but still go with those diagonal lines. The mouth looks a bit weak at the moment and it should be higher up. Also thirding the nose, you need to draw one :).