Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: thernz on February 22, 2009, 11:12:09 pm

Title: Young Stalin Portrait
Post by: thernz on February 22, 2009, 11:12:09 pm
(http://i364.photobucket.com/albums/oo82/_thernz_/Stalin.png)
I always thought Stain was a man of rugged manliness and now, I'm thinking of making a dating sim about him during his pre-revolution days. Robbing banks, running protection rackets and waging guerrilla warfare, and deflowering Siberian girls. He was perfect dating material.

So yeah, I need crits on it so I can make it worthy to Stalin.
Refs:
http://flashyourstache.files.wordpress.com/2007/12/young-stalin.jpg
http://www.bbc.co.uk/blogs/ni/Stalin_1902.jpg
Title: Re: Young Stalin Portrait
Post by: TrevoriuS on February 22, 2009, 11:17:40 pm
His mouth's a bit narrow and his eyes are larger than that, also it may be good to move the jawbone lighting a slight bit to the left to accentuate the face (as can be seen in the front view reference you posted) is quite slender.

Neat work on this, one of the more appealing to look at portraits I've seen around  :)
Title: Re: Young Stalin Portrait
Post by: thernz on February 23, 2009, 01:35:14 am
(http://i364.photobucket.com/albums/oo82/_thernz_/Stalin3.png)
Hmm, I fixed those issues, I think? I also played a bit with the palette just because.
Title: Re: Young Stalin Portrait
Post by: Helm on February 26, 2009, 11:12:19 pm
(http://www.locustleaves.com/Stalin4.png)

likeness and palette edit. Hope I helped.