Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: .need.4.speed. on January 19, 2006, 02:10:47 am

Title: white stripes
Post by: .need.4.speed. on January 19, 2006, 02:10:47 am

well i was bord i found a picture and use it as a ref pic and here  (http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/7907/faces5qr.png)
heres the ref pic i used
(http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/5153/facesref5wx.png)

i need a little help on the chin iand mybe the nosie

Title: Re: white stripes
Post by: entivore on January 20, 2006, 03:33:36 am

You seem to have made the nose thicker than it was in the pic, on his right (our left) side, and his left (our right) nostril doesn't stand out as much as the photo..

Title: Re: white stripes
Post by: .need.4.speed. on January 23, 2006, 01:49:47 am

you mean like this?
(http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/667/faces29fj.png)

Title: Re: white stripes
Post by: Blick on January 23, 2006, 03:25:36 am

Lightening the lines is just making the nostrils seem less noticable. He means the actual lines themselves make the nostrils look deformed. The left (viewer's right) nostril should be darker and a bit wider, the nostril edge looks to connect directly into the bridge of the nose which is basically the look of a pig nose.

His eyes are also too defined in the corners, making them look deformed. His eyelids aren't even existant and his eyebrows aren't complete, making it even stranger. Also, the hair under his lip is too big. It'd be nice to see some texture to the facial hair, rather than black blotches.

Title: Re: white stripes
Post by: Grops on January 26, 2006, 10:22:49 am

I tried.... I swear it took me 10 minutes to try to fix it.

It didn't look any better...

(http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/7365/poopthiefcopy9ld.gif)

I did find the problem though. That isn't actually Jack White, Tis' a captain of a Seaworthy something...

(I swear that sometime you should try to have some fun and stop drawing protraits.)