Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Emtch on January 12, 2009, 06:52:10 pm

Title: Lion
Post by: Emtch on January 12, 2009, 06:52:10 pm

My progress on the dragon got deleted in a computer crash, so I put it to rest.
Here's a lion. In a frame.
(http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/8632/lejonrs3.png)
4 colors used.

Comments and critique would be awesome.

Title: Re: Lion
Post by: hotnikkelz on January 12, 2009, 07:27:09 pm

face is a bit too slim above the jaw line.  The slope should have a more a shallow gradient. Also where is his man? or is it a she?

Title: Re: Lion
Post by: Emtch on January 14, 2009, 03:33:09 pm

Quote from: hotnikkelz on January 12, 2009, 07:27:09 pm

face is a bit too slim above the jaw line.  The slope should have a more a shallow gradient. Also where is his man? or is it a she?

It has a mane already, but yeah the jaw is too slim. Gonna work on that.

Title: Re: Lion
Post by: hotnikkelz on January 15, 2009, 01:51:44 am

You mean the yellow on the left and right? if so why is it isn't attached to the head, it looks separate. Google a pic on lion.