Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: mrmean on January 16, 2006, 05:59:16 pm

Title: manticore WIP *Updated 19/01-06*
Post by: mrmean on January 16, 2006, 05:59:16 pm

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v453/mrmean/9.png)
Previus stages:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v453/mrmean/5.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v453/mrmean/7.png

i used this image for the base/pose http://www.exzooberance.com/virtual%20zoo/they%20walk/lion/Lion%20485061.jpg
time dedicated: about 3.5hours

as you can see im having problems with the paws
c&c plz

Title: Re: manticore WIP
Post by: Helm on January 16, 2006, 06:01:28 pm

my critique: it's not finished.

Title: Re: manticore WIP
Post by: reydragk on January 17, 2006, 05:04:11 am

ummm...add shading and selout?  As helm said, it's not really close enough to being done to properly critique...

Title: Re: manticore WIP
Post by: Xion on January 17, 2006, 05:08:58 am

The wings look a bit too curved to me right now...maybe shell-like? They should be more pointy and batlike. Dragony.

It seems to me that you've begun AAing too soon.

The eyes should be lower...just a bit...maybe 1....2 px?

Make him fluffy...I feel like hugging something fluffy.

Title: Re: manticore WIP *Updated 19/01-06*
Post by: mrmean on January 19, 2006, 01:58:43 pm

updated ^^
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v453/mrmean/9.png