Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: lolcomet13 on November 26, 2008, 04:31:41 am

Title: platform Link
Post by: lolcomet13 on November 26, 2008, 04:31:41 am
i mad this platform Link
(http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/4550/fsaadvwomenba1.png)
i like the tunic color and all but the face is kinda weird 

what do you think  ;D
Title: Re: platform Link
Post by: Atnas on November 26, 2008, 03:00:51 pm
Hey, a partial edit.

I think you could concentrate less on lines but more on the masses, raise the contrast up so that it's more defined, and do something with the straight legs. I made his shield hand green so it wouldn't take visual priority, but added a lighter shade to make it still visible. I changed his expression because I've always liked WW Link's expressions and this one makes him look sort of curious and peering over the shield. Link never really just plain smiled, there was always something else going on.  :)
(http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii201/temporicide/Pixel/link.png)
 
Zelda II was fun. :3

Title: Re: platform Link
Post by: lolcomet13 on November 26, 2008, 10:48:13 pm
wow hey thanks he looks much much better now thanks  :D
Title: Re: platform Link
Post by: Raytheon on November 27, 2008, 05:26:42 am
you shouldnt use his edit, but see what he changed and try to replicate that
Title: Re: platform Link
Post by: lolcomet13 on November 27, 2008, 05:43:49 am
yea i already change some thing to him
(http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/6859/fsaadvwomensq9.png)
and added an ear
Title: Re: platform Link
Post by: ElementZero on November 27, 2008, 09:23:55 am
(http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6888/linklm1.png)

I made this edit based on Atnas' sprite. I tried to capture the wind waker feeling - tiny feet, the facial expression and a more curvy backbone. The idea of a sidescroller-Zelda in wind waker look is great!