Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Raytheon on November 20, 2008, 10:48:05 pm

Title: i sneak around at night stealing your pillows
Post by: Raytheon on November 20, 2008, 10:48:05 pm
early wip!!

(http://i33.tinypic.com/wuikjd.png)
Splatpixel's lines, just playing around with shading and such
Title: Re: Raytheon's current wips
Post by: Raytheon on November 20, 2008, 11:56:14 pm
update on the first piece
(http://i35.tinypic.com/2hhqio9.png)
Title: Re: i sneak around at night stealing your pillows
Post by: Raytheon on November 21, 2008, 01:28:11 am
update
(http://i33.tinypic.com/2yn3wjl.png)
Title: Re: i sneak around at night stealing your pillows
Post by: Raytheon on November 21, 2008, 06:45:54 am
final update for the day
(http://i34.tinypic.com/2ijj7go.png)
Title: Re: i sneak around at night stealing your pillows
Post by: Sherman Gill on November 21, 2008, 10:15:05 pm
I actually like the first best. These newer ones you're trying to define everything the wrong way and it comes out too sharp.
Title: Re: i sneak around at night stealing your pillows
Post by: Raytheon on November 22, 2008, 12:48:55 am
(http://i35.tinypic.com/2exscbm.png)

ill lessen down on the definition in my next update then
Title: Re: i sneak around at night stealing your pillows
Post by: Raytheon on November 22, 2008, 08:31:28 pm
hmm
(http://i38.tinypic.com/11m4adi.png)?
Title: Re: i sneak around at night stealing your pillows
Post by: balls01 on November 23, 2008, 03:46:38 am
hmm
(http://i38.tinypic.com/11m4adi.png)?

ehats with those thick black likes on his mouth?(sorry of thast rude) i just find them bit odd and not making te piece better
Title: Re: i sneak around at night stealing your pillows
Post by: Opacus on November 23, 2008, 08:56:56 am
hmm
(http://i38.tinypic.com/11m4adi.png)?

ehats with those thick black likes on his mouth?(sorry of thast rude) i just find them bit odd and not making te piece better

It's not his lines. And they're not blades. It's kind of a doll like figure that has his mouth held closed with what you call those 'blade like things'.
Title: Re: i sneak around at night stealing your pillows
Post by: balls01 on November 23, 2008, 08:59:53 am
they look like lines, is stitches the word your looking for?

if so they shouldnt be that thick
Title: Re: i sneak around at night stealing your pillows
Post by: Opacus on November 23, 2008, 09:19:25 am
they look like lines, is stitches the word your looking for?

if so they shouldnt be that thick

Why not?
It looks fine to me. I think it would actually make it look alot less interesting without those stitches.
Title: Re: i sneak around at night stealing your pillows
Post by: Raytheon on November 23, 2008, 11:34:30 am
Originally it had a cross in the middle as you can see in the first post but it looked out of place so i removed it :E
Title: Re: i sneak around at night stealing your pillows
Post by: balls01 on November 24, 2008, 08:22:20 am
what ever thats my opinion

ok my next grumble, the shien on the fore head first color going well then the next color well but then it gets light again why?
Title: Re: i sneak around at night stealing your pillows
Post by: Helm on November 24, 2008, 10:53:06 am
Balls please put more effort into justifying your critique. Everybody's got opinions. The difference between an opinion and critique is that one backs up their opinion with a rationale that doesn't terminate at 'I'd prefer it like that'.
Title: Re: i sneak around at night stealing your pillows
Post by: Raytheon on November 26, 2008, 10:01:31 am
what ever thats my opinion

ok my next grumble, the shien on the fore head first color going well then the next color well but then it gets light again why?
Now that i think about it, i don't know :x

will fix that