Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Raytheon on November 20, 2008, 10:48:05 pm
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early wip!!
(http://i33.tinypic.com/wuikjd.png)
Splatpixel's lines, just playing around with shading and such
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update on the first piece
(http://i35.tinypic.com/2hhqio9.png)
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update
(http://i33.tinypic.com/2yn3wjl.png)
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final update for the day
(http://i34.tinypic.com/2ijj7go.png)
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I actually like the first best. These newer ones you're trying to define everything the wrong way and it comes out too sharp.
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(http://i35.tinypic.com/2exscbm.png)
ill lessen down on the definition in my next update then
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hmm
(http://i38.tinypic.com/11m4adi.png)?
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hmm
(http://i38.tinypic.com/11m4adi.png)?
ehats with those thick black likes on his mouth?(sorry of thast rude) i just find them bit odd and not making te piece better
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hmm
(http://i38.tinypic.com/11m4adi.png)?
ehats with those thick black likes on his mouth?(sorry of thast rude) i just find them bit odd and not making te piece better
It's not his lines. And they're not blades. It's kind of a doll like figure that has his mouth held closed with what you call those 'blade like things'.
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they look like lines, is stitches the word your looking for?
if so they shouldnt be that thick
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they look like lines, is stitches the word your looking for?
if so they shouldnt be that thick
Why not?
It looks fine to me. I think it would actually make it look alot less interesting without those stitches.
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Originally it had a cross in the middle as you can see in the first post but it looked out of place so i removed it :E
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what ever thats my opinion
ok my next grumble, the shien on the fore head first color going well then the next color well but then it gets light again why?
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Balls please put more effort into justifying your critique. Everybody's got opinions. The difference between an opinion and critique is that one backs up their opinion with a rationale that doesn't terminate at 'I'd prefer it like that'.
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what ever thats my opinion
ok my next grumble, the shien on the fore head first color going well then the next color well but then it gets light again why?
Now that i think about it, i don't know :x
will fix that