Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: rabidbaboy on October 29, 2008, 12:46:55 pm

Title: What Villainy Hast Thou Commited?[WIP]
Post by: rabidbaboy on October 29, 2008, 12:46:55 pm

(http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/9004/kidfinaltu4.png)

Took a break from the animation (break? I haven't started yet!  :yell: ) to join a competition over at Pixeltendo.

The subject is "The Villain", and I opted for a more conceptual approach. Can you guess what villainy this shild is commiting? :>

Aaanyway, need help with his arms and that piece of crumpled paper. I crumpled a piece of paper myself, but still doesn't look right.

Title: Re: What Villainy Hast Thou Commited?[WIP]
Post by: Jakten on October 29, 2008, 10:33:05 pm

Nice work so far. The crumpled paper I think looks more like a flower than crumpled paper. It would probably look more crumpled if the whole flat surfaces were highlighted more rather than just the edges.
(http://www.bravenewtraveler.com/images/entries/20070429-crumpled-paper.jpg)

Also do you plan to dither his whole face? it looks kind of odd at the moment.

I really like how the hair is looking right now.

As for the villiany.. drawing on lined paper? An atrocity I practiced many times as a child o. o