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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: lolcomet13 on September 26, 2008, 04:53:01 am

Title: cartoonish green dinosaur
Post by: lolcomet13 on September 26, 2008, 04:53:01 am
(http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/561/pokemonconpm2.png)

A green dog like dinosaur (I like the eyes  :) )
Title: Re: cartoonish green dinosaur
Post by: Jim16 on September 26, 2008, 06:46:37 am
looks good.....legs need to be defined.
Title: Re: cartoonish green dinosaur
Post by: Tremulant on September 26, 2008, 05:52:07 pm
(http://h1.ripway.com/tremulant/lolsaurus.png)

There's a real problem with the centre of gravity, in that he looks like he's about to tip over backwards. I think separating the feet a bit and shifting the head to the left could help somewhat.
Much of the edit was just me messing around, but I think his neck could stand to be lengthened a bit, an the selout needs to go at all costs. The edit was quick, and there are still some major balance and anatomy issues, so take it for whatever it's worth.

I played with some other stuff too, but that was mainly a result of the fact that I like dinosaurs and couldn't resist.
He's pretty cute. Keep it up.  :)
Title: Re: cartoonish green dinosaur
Post by: lolcomet13 on September 26, 2008, 09:38:57 pm
wow,thanks a lot  :)
Title: Re: cartoonish green dinosaur
Post by: PypeBros on September 26, 2008, 10:07:46 pm
on the other side, bending backwards gave him that pet-look of a dog waiting for a sugar that is too high for him... which is quite funny for a zilla-sized dinosaur
Title: Re: cartoonish green dinosaur
Post by: Tremulant on September 27, 2008, 02:50:29 am
I see what you mean, Pype, and if that was the intent I'd say go for the leaned back look. If you do, though, you should reposition the tail so that he's using it as a brace to keep himself upright (actually, if you did that it'd be awesome). :P