Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Organ_House on September 06, 2008, 02:38:30 pm
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I think it's hard to vis where everything will fit onto one of these naked dolls. Standard crit on this sort of thing is a lot of lighting/anatomy stuff, which probably isn't really what you need. My advice is make up some finished characters, with hair and clothes and everything, get crits on those, and then work backwards from there if you need to get a reusable base.
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Hi, on ur first post u said that there was a male and a female but i couldnt tell the difference between the two. One major reason is the female had no chest. Also i'm not too sure why ur missing the black outline in places i'd either keep the outline round the whole image or remove it and shade accordingly.
Are you trying to follow the stereotypical RPG style or are aiming for something cartoony?
You might want to perfect the Doll before you start animating and things because going back and redoing everything after you have recieved crits will be a long and tideous process.
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Did a quick edit useing your colours to make the one i thought was the female (it was hard to tell!) more feminin.
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/heyy15/edit1.gif)
I'm sure you can come up with something than this quick edit but atleast i can easily tell it's supposed to be female. : )
I also find it odd that your male has bigger hips than your female. ???
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