Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Bacteriophage on September 05, 2008, 10:08:16 pm

Title: Civil Disobedience
Post by: Bacteriophage on September 05, 2008, 10:08:16 pm

Since PJ isn't critting much (probably due to the size of the piece) I thought I'd post it here and fish for help on improving.

http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/35445.htm

Thanks, guys.  :-*

Title: Re: Civil Disobedience
Post by: ptoing on September 06, 2008, 03:15:52 pm

How about actually posting the picture? Do not expect people to click links.

Title: Re: Civil Disobedience
Post by: Bacteriophage on September 07, 2008, 06:29:13 pm

Uh, sure thing.

(http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/9731/avataria0.png)

Title: Re: Civil Disobedience
Post by: Cure on September 07, 2008, 06:42:28 pm

If you're looking for critique at pixeljoint the WIP forum would be a much better bet than the gallery.
I don't feel the browns used to shad the paper work so well, and you could add rough texture/reddish tint to the bricks, other than that it looks fine (It is small, so there are less flaws to point out)