Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Dokozai on September 04, 2008, 07:45:06 pm

Title: -Tales of the Lone Bandit- (Arnes Pallet)
Post by: Dokozai on September 04, 2008, 07:45:06 pm
The thread for a vidogame project, my other topic died a miserable death...
 :'( Also, I was making to many posts consecutivly, and I only wanted critique on the main sprite.

So, lets try this again, this time with feeling!


Imp
(http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/9352/impad4.png)
Not much is know about him now, but I do know he is a greedy prankster.

Mite
(http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/7465/miteji6.png)
In many aspects, they are the goombas of the game.

Boomy
(http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7339/boomeryv0.png)
The living bomb, it can use it's body temperature to ignite the fuse on the top of its body.

Batt
(http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/4265/batoi7.png)
It's a bat... That rhymes with hat!

Runt
(http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/3839/runtgs3.png)
A member of a band of collecters, The Twisted, they are only out to collect anything, and everything of
great value. They all wear 2-colored masks, signifying they are members.

Grass Tileset
(http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3410/grasstilemk1.png)
A grass tileset. Guess what it's used for.

Thats about it for now, I should be updating daily...





Cheers!
Title: Re: -Tales of the Lone Bandit- (Arnes Pallet)
Post by: Dokozai on September 05, 2008, 12:45:02 am
(http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/8442/shlurpcp8.png)
Shlurp.

It licks you.
Title: Re: -Tales of the Lone Bandit- (Arnes Pallet)
Post by: Dokozai on September 05, 2008, 11:31:35 pm
Yay, new tiles and a mock-up!

(http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9868/mockuprd8.png)

A heart
(http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/1369/heartxr7.png)
Your health, it keeps you alive!


Cloud Tiles
(http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/8349/cloudtilekh2.png)
As seen in the mock-up.

Any help is kindly appreciated!
:)
Title: Re: -Tales of the Lone Bandit- (Arnes Pallet)
Post by: dfcastelao on September 06, 2008, 12:18:43 am
Main character design is lovely. The most obvious problem that I spot is that it doesn't pop up to the eyes. Is quite difficult to distinguish him on that over saturated blue sky. Try using a more vivid color on him.