Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: dro man jerr on September 03, 2008, 03:12:05 am

Title: groady shroom
Post by: dro man jerr on September 03, 2008, 03:12:05 am

(http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/5372/groadyshroomxz6.png)
(http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/5372/groadyshroomxz6.5e8ddc79e7.jpg)
any cc or ways to make more trippy?

Title: Re: groady shroom
Post by: Andre on September 03, 2008, 05:16:48 am

I would say you could make it more round on top, and also, watch out the aliasing ;D
I don't know THAT much about dithering, But i like the effect you have done there, nice job ;)

Title: Re: groady shroom
Post by: decker on September 03, 2008, 01:58:03 pm

Depends a lot on whether this is going to stand alone as art or be placed on other backgrounds.
If standalone, I would go for more luminosity, glow in the dark effect. Also more intricate patterning on the underside of the cap and the stalk, now they are just line scratches.

Title: Re: groady shroom
Post by: Opacus on September 03, 2008, 04:25:35 pm

Before you concentrate on fancy dithering and textures: Get the volumes right.
It looks flat.

Title: Re: groady shroom
Post by: dro man jerr on September 03, 2008, 10:31:03 pm

im going to round it off now
and what do you mean by the volumes

Title: Re: groady shroom
Post by: Cure on September 04, 2008, 01:23:31 am

He means it looks like the entire image is on the same plane, it's flat, nothing bulges forward or recedes back.  There is no depth.